Smoke-Tower's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Classic Darts]

well...

technicaly you didnt script it by your self ( or memory ) because you had a book called Game Desigend Demystified... also isnt that the book where it teaches you to make online games? like where 2 or more players in a game at once? because i checked it out on Amazon awhile back...

well no matter

it was ok but the graphics did sortof suck...

next time just make them a tad bit better
and also add a aimer and a way to tell where your ganna hit it took me like 3 minutes to hit a number i needed to win
-Justin

nintendogeek responds:

Well yes the book does teach you many games including multiplayer. Now i did practise with the script i didn't just take it ok i leaned from it.

[Office Chimp]

Damn kid..

you drew them pictures good :)

-Justin
well great job!

hope to see more of your flash soon!

Shaihulud responds:

Shucks Pa! Thanks a ton. Next time I'll draw some original characters I've been cooking up.

[How to draw guns w/ lines]

Ok... Im Being Generous Today...

Ok im giving it a score: 4 & a overall: 10

now... explain...

your guns are poorly drawn mate
dont teach us to draw your guns because they are pretty cheapy
now... that you have done that everyone who watched this is now stupider

-Justin :)
well since its 1st tutorial its ok

GibsonR responds:

...its better than tracing bitmaps everytime you need a weapon, and it takes like 5 seconds to make... so w/e

[Crystal Interface]

well then...

your "graphical design class" must have like a stoner for a teacher most stuff i see from people in design classes are actualy.... lets say "Awesome" this shit was like stupid and dont send like a site thing you made to NG its just plan stupid

-Justin

also if your taking them classes shouldnt you be making alot better shit?

lostboyofthepit responds:

well i was kinda taking 4 other classes, and working a full 40 hours a week, and they just taught the basics really. nothing too fancy. alot of the good stuff the other students learned on their own. but i had to work, so i did the best i could :(

p.s. i just wanted to get some opinions on what could use improvement. and personally ive seen much much worse on here

[Goblin dance revolution 2]

Pretty good... AGAIN!

my girlfriend still thinks it cute... :D

well then i think its cool that you can actualy do stuff like this
well hope to see more again!

-Justin :D

Klynex responds:

haha thx a lot ,your other review was funny :P

[Goblin dance revolution]

At 1st

i thought it was ganna be like the Dance Dance Revolution where the arrows come up and you like press the arrows keys but eh
i like it my girlfriend thinks its cute ;)

-Justin :)

Klynex responds:

:D!!! Thx

[The Lego Dress Up]

Ok.... ??

when did link... get a lightsaber?
like theres link's shield.... but he has a fucking ligthsaber....
ok then mate it has good graphics but give each character more shit then just 2 items and abunch of clothes

-Justin :)

Aprime responds:

ummm, that was the items box, not the links box, lol

thanks for the tips

www.aprime.tk

[Habbo Hotel Dress Up]

Its a good dress up...

but dont remind me of habbo hotel mate....

that place banned me like 7986453128465132 times

just for calling Callie ( the uk hotel owner )
A Little Shit Because She Banned Me Abunch Of Times

yeah... well its funny to script little noobs in that game and trick them into giving you all there stuff :)

and and freaking Habbox fired me because i called Brojo ( the usa habbo hotel owner guy ) A Fagit Because He Banned Me Abunch Of Times Too

well then nice game

-Justin :)

Aprime responds:

Hahahaahhaahaha, jker, how did u trick thoes lil noobs, email me, ;)
thanks for voting

Add me to favs
oooo and can you try to submit all my work to collection please!

[My Flash Tutor 1]

Pretty good tutorial mate!

I actualy liked this tutorial

yeah its pretty good better then all my tutorials put together!

and yeah it has better graphics but... yeah who cares

But you my friend make good tutorials!

hope to see more in the futre!

-Justin :)

Aprime responds:

Thanks, Look at my other work like my 'How to draw birds' or sumat
Thanks bibi

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